Wednesday 6th: Today we showed our rough cut if our opening sequence to our class (rough cut in previous post). We know what needed to be done but we got feedback to improve on it from our class that goes as follows:
Need more titles to establish its a film opening;
Establish genre more quickly/use conventions of thriller/horror more explicitly;
Use title correctly;
Maybe use of point of view shots to suggest being watched;
Set the scene better - establish shot
- dialogue - why are they there?.
We re going to take in account what has been said about our footage, and keep it all in mind when we refilm to make sure that we make the best opening sequence we possibly could.
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